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Title: Needed Release
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR21
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Genre: Slash
Characters: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: Male/Male; Master/Sub; Flogging
Word Count: 500
Beta: avamclean
Written For: slavefics Comment Fic Challenge (Prompt at End of Fic)

Crossposted: ncisfanfic; ncis_fic; gibbs_dinozzo; ncis_slash; ncis_spankyfic

Summary: Release can come in many forms...

He shivered as he felt the braids of the flogger drag across his freshly shaved skin. The pattern being drawn was random as far as he could tell, but it was working progressively downward on his body. As it trailed over his abdomen, he tried to move in an attempt to squirm away from its ultimate goal. However, the bonds held him tight. Leather circled his wrists and ankles, holding him place for the whims of his Master. Soon, the braids were trailing his erect cock and he was unable to hold back the moan. A seductive laugh from above him left him blushing as he felt warm breath tickle his ear.

"You're perfect like this. All tied up and no way out until I'm done with you."

The voice stopped as a light sting hit the top of his thigh, mere inches from his aching cock. Moments later, a matching sting graced the opposite leg and he tried to move again. He wasn't sure if he was moving away from the torture or toward it.

"What would the others think if they saw you like this? Willingly letting me tie you up and give you want you need? You need this, don't you? You want me to wrap you so tight you can't escape. Spank you until your skin is all red and shiny. Fuck you until all you feel in your ass every minute of every day is my hard dick."

He wanted to deny it. He wanted to tell his Master to go fuck himself. He wanted to turn the tables and be the one in charge, but he knew he couldn't. Instead, he moaned around the gag in his mouth and thrust his hips forward as best he could, looking for any kind of relief. He found it.

The flogger came down on his skin in a barrage of hits, some hard, some soft, but each one was just what he needed. He was on the brink of coming and knew that if he did, his Master would be disappointed. He tried to stave off the inevitable, but the last blow landed on his cock and he cried as his come pulsed forward, coating his stomach.

He came back to his senses when he felt a finger trailing across his stomach, leaving a path through his drying come. The finger traveled up his chest and then dipped along side the gag and into his mouth. He flicked his tongue over the finger, wiping it clean. Then the hand left his mouth and all too soon, he felt the fingers pinching and twisting a nipple to hardness. He shuddered when he heard the voice of his Master take on the tone that told him to expect punishment.

"It's your own fault you know. You should be able to keep this hard and weeping until I tell you to release it."

He felt his Master's other hand grasp his spent cock and lightly squeeze it.

"Got it, Boss?"


Prompt: In private, s/he's dominant - in public, the other person is. - lothy

Comments

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tejas
Jun. 9th, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
My kink, let me show you it.

THANK YOU!!!

Edited at 2009-06-09 01:18 am (UTC)
kaylashay
Jun. 9th, 2009 01:21 am (UTC)
:-)

Hee!

Oh!!! I have a bone to pick with you... I think it was you that linked to a SG1 series of fics with Jack/Daniel/Paul on twitter. If so... I spent most of last week and all this weekend reading them!!
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webbgirl
Jun. 9th, 2009 01:51 am (UTC)
Guh. There's really not enough bottom!Gibbs out there. This was amazing and hot. I'll refrain from asking for asking for more, but y'know...if you wanted.
tejas
Jun. 9th, 2009 01:53 am (UTC)
Nope, not nearly enough.
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spoonyriffic
Jun. 9th, 2009 02:22 am (UTC)
OMG BOTTOM!GIBBS. Heeeeeee! When I read the last line, and it clicked in my mind, I was like "No. WAY." And then I squeed. Loudly.

I think it's the Queen. Seriously - I was listening to it just now, and then I find bottom!Gibbs fic! And they were the inspiration for my newest fic that I posted (which also has bottom!Gibbs!). It's definitely Queen. They magically make bottom!Gibbs appear.

I demand more bottom!Gibbs!

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kaylashay
Jun. 9th, 2009 02:24 am (UTC)
LOL!

That is too funny!! Queen! The secret to bottom!Gibbs. Another Gibbs mystery solved!
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murgy31
Jun. 9th, 2009 04:34 am (UTC)
That was awesome~!
kaylashay
Jun. 9th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC)
Thanks!!! :-)
twicet
Jun. 9th, 2009 05:59 am (UTC)
I love this.
kaylashay
Jun. 9th, 2009 06:07 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm happy with how it turned out. :-)
laura_trekkie
Jun. 9th, 2009 07:46 am (UTC)
This was hot, and I liked the reveal at the end :).

Laura.
kaylashay
Jun. 10th, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
It was a fun reveal. I was originally going to reveal the first time Tony spoke (I even had a 'boss' written there), but then realized it would be all the better to leave it 'til the end.

:-)
azure_chaos
Jun. 9th, 2009 08:57 am (UTC)
It was obvious to me the roles were reversed to how we usually see them when I saw this: "You're perfect like this. All tied up and no way out until I'm done with you."

Just seemed like a very DiNozzo line :) which basically means that I thought your characterisation was spot on.

It's not often that I enjoy the reversal of roles, but this was hot and I like the conflict that you give Gibbs too; but that ultimately he needs/wants to be the sub. The gag might stop him from denying he wants it, even without the gag he wouldn't change it.

It leaves you feeling like he's really gonna regret coming so soon (but in all kinds of glorious and delicious ways). DiNozzo would make an intriguing dom.

I really enjoyed it, short but oh so hot.

Nate
kaylashay
Jun. 10th, 2009 12:29 am (UTC)
Yay for characterization!!! :-)

I've toyed with the idea of bottom!Gibbs several times because sometimes I think he needs to let go just as much as the next guy, since he's always so 'in control' on the job.

Yeah, he's in so much trouble for coming early. Hee! Naughty Gibbs...

Glad you liked!!! :-)
christinalp
Jun. 9th, 2009 09:26 am (UTC)
hhot
kaylashay
Jun. 10th, 2009 12:29 am (UTC)
Yay! :-)
dhae_knight
Jun. 9th, 2009 04:11 pm (UTC)
*purrrr* That was good. I thought it was Gibbs being tied up - mostly I think the freshly shaved thing. Can't really picture Tony without his hair... ;-)

I love me some sub!Gibbs. :-)
kaylashay
Jun. 10th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC)
Now you have me wanting to do a fic with Tony getting a full-body shave. ;-)

And sub!Gibbs can rock!
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xanthe
Jun. 9th, 2009 06:54 pm (UTC)
Role reversal is a big kink of mine so i really enjoyed this! I bet Tony did too *g*. Having Gibbs all tied up and at his mercy! Nice one!
kaylashay
Jun. 10th, 2009 12:31 am (UTC)
Yay! I hit a kink!! :-)

Tony really likes having the boss tied up and at his disposal. It's a big kink for him. ;-)
dinozzo111
Jun. 10th, 2009 07:17 am (UTC)
Hubba, hubba - delicious visuals - love it when it's sub!Gibbs...;P
kaylashay
Jun. 11th, 2009 01:32 am (UTC)
Yay for Sub!Gibbs!! :-)
ayankha
Jun. 10th, 2009 08:41 pm (UTC)
oh there so aren't enough bottom!gibbs fics out there... thank you oh so much for this ^-^
kaylashay
Jun. 11th, 2009 01:32 am (UTC)
There definitely aren't enough... the world needs more bottom!Gibbs. It would be a much happier place.

:-)
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sexycazzy
Oct. 27th, 2009 07:13 pm (UTC)
this is great! I didn't even realise that it was Tony who was doing the flogging till the end - I had to re-read that sentence - twice - before it clicked in my mind!

Wow...did you do any more bottom!Gibbs? I hope so!
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