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Fic: Five Minutes 'Til Midnight (NCIS)

Title: Five Minutes 'Til Midnight
Author: kaylashay
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS. It’s part of CBS and some others.
Rating: FR21
Warnings: M/M Slash
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Word Count: 1,366
Written For: lovelyladylooks
Thanks: azraelz_angel & writinginct

Cross Posted: ncisfanfic; gibbs_abby_tony; ncis_slash; gibbs_dinozzo

Summary: It's five minutes 'til midnight and both are seeking a substitute.

Part 1: Sea

He stayed to the edge of the pulsating crowd, letting the flickering lights and the thrumming of the music wash over him. He came to this place to forget, to drive out of his mind what he cannot have. The bodies on the dance floor wove an intricate pattern that he longed to lose himself within, if only for a night. It was out of his comfort zone, it was anonymous, and it was just what he needed.

Slipping into the sea of sweat and hard bodies, he let his inhibitions go as partner after partner pressed against him, some in front and some from behind. The feel of their heat surrounded him and worked to reach that place deep inside that he kept buried, that he had to hide every day to those around, to the one he wanted.

The pace of the music dictated the movements of the crowd. One moment he had his arms wrapped around the waist of a young body, occasionally thrusting his hips to beat. The next moment had someone returning the favor behind him and he enjoyed every moment of it. He filed the moments into his mind to replay when the need overwhelmed him.

With five minutes left of the old year, the wave of bodies grew in size. He was surrounded on all sides by potential substitutes for what he could not have. He craved the contact, welcomed any who approached.

He shuddered when he felt hands wrap around his waist from behind. He was pulled flush against a toned body that began a rocking motion into his ass. He could feel the press of the hardening length against his jeans and relished in the sensation. He pushed back against the body and smiled at that gasp his movements drew from his unseen partner.

The hands tightened around his waist before they worked ever so slowly up his sweat soaked silk shirt. Every brush of the fingers through the material sent shockwaves through his sensitized system. He was torn between pushing back into the hardness behind him or pushing forward into the questing hands that had reached his nipples.

His legs almost gave out when one nipple was pinched between the strong fingers of his partner. He sucked in air in an attempt to hold back his moan, but he failed. He heard a light chuckle behind him and felt a puff of air on his neck as his partner leaned in to breath his scent.

Desperate for more, he twisted his body within the hold until he was face to face with his mysterious partner. They held their eyes in place for what seemed like eternity until the connection was broken with one softly spoken word, “Boss?”

His heart fluttered when he felt the breath from that spoken word ghost across his face.

Part 2: Silver

He stayed to the edge of the pulsating crowd, letting the flickering lights and the thrumming of the music wash over him. He came to this place to forget, to drive out of his mind what he cannot have. The bodies on the dance floor wove an intricate pattern that he longed to lose himself within, if only for a night. It was out of his comfort zone, it was anonymous, and it was just what he needed.

He moved deftly through the press of hard bodies looking for the right one, the one that would be his substitute. He worked from partner to partner discarding each; this one too soft, that one too young, this one not strong enough. It was hard to find something that matched what he really wanted to have pressed against him.

Bodies moved in and out of his sphere, but none captured his attention. With five minutes remaining of the old year, he began to fret that his attempts would be left dry. His substitute for the night was nowhere to be found and he was almost out of time. The crowds would disperse shortly and those who hadn’t paired off would be alone that night.

Then he saw a head of silver when bodies parted in front of him. It was like the parting of the sea taking him to his goal. He moved quickly for fear of losing his prize. He pressed in behind the body and welcomed the warmth that pressed back into him.

He snaked his arms around the waist of his partner and began rocking against the tight ass in time with the music. When his partner responded and pressed back into his hardening dick, a gasp escaped his throat. The pleasure that coursed through his body from that simple contact overwhelmed his senses. With the sensations carrying his body higher, he tightened his grip and then moved possessively up the older man’s chest. He let his fingers lightly brush the skin underneath the clinging silk shirt.

He could feel the quakes running through his partner’s body with each brush of his hand. The rocking of his hips increased with the beat of the music surrounding them. Ever so slowly, his hands reached their destination and he tweaked the hardened nipple between his fingertips. The stifled moan was just the reaction he hoped for, the one he imagined his real desire would make. He let out a low chuckle at the thought as he leaned in closer.

The head of silver hair was calling to him as he pressed closer to bring his head to the exposed neck. He inhaled deeply and was shocked to smell that scent he loved so much filling his nostrils. He inhaled again, letting the scent fuel his imagination that this hard, willing body in front of him was not a substitute.

Then the body twisted beneath him and his partner turned to face him. He debated closing his eyes, wanting so desperately for the illusion to last. Just as he thought to close them, his green eyes locked with the icy blues that were so familiar to him; he thought he was dreaming. He stared into their depths not wanting the moment to end, silently begging for it to be real.

Then he breathed out the word he never thought he would say when so close to his desire. “Boss?”

Part 3: Real

The hours crawled by like years, until, on the stroke of midnight, the crowd swelled around them. The undulating bodies pressed them ever close together and they wrapped themselves together in a tight cocoon, never breaking eye contact. As the festivities around them continued to escalate, they rocked their bodies together.

In perfect harmony, they moved their hips together. Their thrusts connected their hardened lengths together. They could feel the other's arousal through the material of the pants that covered them.

As one, they moved their mouths together until they were sealed in a kiss, tongues dueling for dominance. The silver haired one won the unspoken battle and began to map the younger one’s mouth. Groans escaped around the sealed lips as they pressed both their mouths and cocks together.

Panting for breath they pulled apart, increasing the thrusts of their lower bodies. They supported each other on the open floor with no walls to press up against. They stared into each other’s eyes as they both gave their release with an almost silent moan.

Clinging together in the sea of people, shaking with ecstasy from their release, they carried a conversation with their eyes. Permission was sought and permission was granted. Both knew that they would not leave that place, that bubble where only they existed without the other. They were bound together and ready to explore the wants and desires that played across both their expressions.

As the crowds began to recede and they found themselves able to move to the shadows, a small voice whispered out, “Is this for real?”

The response received was a slap to the back of the head, an action so familiar and yet foreign in that time and place. The slap transformed into a caress that moved down his neck and back until the hand came to a rest of the toned ass it sought.

“That answer enough?” was breathed out at as they pulled each other from the room.


( 48 Campfires — Leave a Comment )
Dec. 12th, 2007 02:52 am (UTC)
Oh my giddy God's dirty knickers. ::fans self:: That has to be the hottest thing I think I have ever read.

God damn I just got out of the shower. Now I need a cold one.
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:01 am (UTC)
*points you back toward the shower*


Love the Silver Fox icon by the way. :-)
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:09 am (UTC)
You do write awesome fic. I must hand it to you. :)
Dec. 12th, 2007 06:36 am (UTC)
Dec. 12th, 2007 03:57 am (UTC)
nnnngh! brain broken...first ncis slash fic I've read and HOT DAMN what a way to suck a person in!
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:06 am (UTC)
I'm your first...?! *smiles*

Hee hee... well, I have a few more slash fics to my name floating around on my journal.

Crypt Keeping (Gibbs/DiNozzo)

The Navy Watcher Series (DiNozzo/Xander(BtVS))
1- Taste the Rainbow
2 - You'll Do
3 - Best Gift of All

And I list some recs for someone else on this post:
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:16 am (UTC)

OMFG! just the heading makes me love you! You were my first ncis slash and now I'm in love with you like an insecure naieve ex-virgin!

and your icon gave me a happy
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:23 am (UTC)
*evil grin*

There are currently three fics in the Tony/Xander verse with many more to come. They are actually the first slash pairing I wrote. I've always loved Xander and then I found NCIS and Tony this summer and my mind had to find a way for them to co-exist in my 'happy fic writing' place, so it naturally put them together.


I also have some non-slash ncis fics (or that can be read as slash if you want to...) all of them are:

If you want all my BtVS crossover fics and artwork, check out TTH:

Here's a sampler from my Supernaturally Twisted art collection:

Dec. 12th, 2007 04:29 am (UTC)
i have this horribley wonderful feeling that I'm not going to be getting any sleep tonight. My two favorite characters in creation...Xan and Tony....you are wonderful
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:31 am (UTC)
There's more of us out there! Yay!!

They are my favorites too. :-)

Edited at 2007-12-12 04:31 am (UTC)
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:20 am (UTC)
Now that's one sexy pic....

can I get a Tony and Xander in bed together? *innocent look*
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:22 am (UTC)
I've actually been looking around for pictures of Tony that would suit my purposes for a manip of that kind. I'm getting close. *wink*
Dec. 12th, 2007 04:56 am (UTC)
As I told you when I first read it - this is HOT -cold shower needin'- HOT!

We really need to find a hot spot and go clubbing --between my fic and your's I think our subconscious is trying to tell us something!
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:01 am (UTC)

It's funny when I was halfway through writing this I went *headslap* CJ's fic was in a club.

Then I was like, mine's a bit different so it's okay. Plus I had Tony behind Gibbs instead of the other way around. ;-)

Let's see, you are on the east coast I believe and I'm in far western Kentucky... Hmm... I've got others I need to go see on the east coast... *plots*

How about showering with Tony? *points at icon*
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:02 am (UTC)
And not to rush good fic, but when will we see what happened once they got in that cab?

Dec. 12th, 2007 05:35 am (UTC)
lol...still tweaking the rebuild on the pc- and OMFG I have OpenOffice finally - no more plain text editor ;D GO ME!

Kink to follow soon, my pets :D /CJ strokes computer and purrsss


How EXACTLY would showering with Tony COOL me off? Distract me - yes, inspire me with flavored shower gel- absolutely, but cool me off - I don't think so...... bwhahaha

I'm going back to my porn, er, um, fic now :D
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:38 am (UTC)
OMG... I just saw the Dick Tracy icon and before I realized it was Dick Tracy I was like... That's Abby in her blond wig and Tony! Plot splat...

Anywho... Showering with Tony... *le sigh* if only...

*pulls mind out of porny thoughts only to have it fall right back*
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:44 am (UTC)
lmao - I keep thinking it would be the PERFECT couple's Halloween costume for Tony?Abby and it could be SO naughty...

and I could SO see the two of them quoting it all night ;D

Dick Tracy: You know, it's legal for me to take you down to the station and sweat it out of you under the light.
Breathless Mahoney: I sweat a lot better in the dark.

(one of my favorite lines from this flick)
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:46 am (UTC)
It's been so long ago that I watched it that I don't know anything from it...

But that is a perfect line for a dressed up Tony/Abby.

*back away evil plot bunny*
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:50 am (UTC)
Breathless Mahoney: Thanks for calling. I was beginning to wonder what a girl had to do to get arrested.

Dick Tracy: Wearing that dress is a step in the right direction.

OMGS- I have to watch this tomorrow ;)

music for inspiration: http://youtube.com/watch?v=GCydiTNFbZc
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:55 am (UTC)
Darn... I'm gonna have to rent this now.

I'll be watching it with Tony/Abby in mind.

Dec. 12th, 2007 05:18 am (UTC)
*pants* hot... hot....hot....

*alterego pokes* I think she's broken mate!

*grins*thanks for sharing!
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:23 am (UTC)

Inspiration hit from lovelyladylooks prompt.

Dec. 12th, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
Stick and stones may break my bones but men with cuffs excite me ;)
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:39 am (UTC)

I like that rhyme!

Dec. 12th, 2007 05:39 am (UTC)
lol...I'm not broken...I'm actually better now than I have been since my laptop fried - WOOT - and the best part is I should be able to access all my STUFF now from the hard drive of the laptop when I connect to this pc- my life is GOOD!

I feel the need for Creepy!Tony to come out and play.... after I finish Get(ting) Off of course ;D
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:41 am (UTC)
bad me...that last part of the last line is NAUGHTY - lmao - and totally unintentional! bwhahaha....
Dec. 12th, 2007 05:43 am (UTC)
LoL... and I totally didn't see it.

Dec. 12th, 2007 05:41 am (UTC)
*is torn between all of CJs wonderful works*

More please? *bats eyes*
Dec. 12th, 2007 06:05 am (UTC)
OMG!!! *squee*

Dare I think that this wonderfully hot fic is what resulted from my prompt? o.O
Because if it is, I am left speechless!^.^

That was so incredibly hot. Desperate at the same time and I really could feel both of their urgency.

This is just... wow. Thanks a lot for writing this :-)

P.S.: Sorry for the late comment but I live in europe so I guess we're in different time zones :-(
Dec. 12th, 2007 06:08 am (UTC)
This is the result of the prompt. :-)

Definitely different time zones as I'm in the central part of the US (Kentucky). I did live in Austria for five weeks a few years back though.

Glad you enjoyed!
Dec. 12th, 2007 06:13 am (UTC)
*enjoyed" is like the understatement of the century.lol.

it's just awesome and on top of that it's the first fic that was written to a prompt from me *ever* (also the first prompt I ever made since I'm really new to livejournal.lol)

I'll do my best to get your fic out today. chances are good but it might be tomorrow before I post to check spelling etc.. :-)
Dec. 12th, 2007 06:15 am (UTC)

No rush on the fic... fics come as they come... But I'm looking forward to your take on the prompt I gave you. :-)

Dec. 12th, 2007 06:19 am (UTC)
So am I, believe me, so am I.lol

I noticed that when starting with one idea I get a million others and I have to decide what to use and what not... sometimes it escalates and a smallish fic grows and grows and grows...

I'm not making promises but more like giving a warning ;-) Once I'm hooked, there is almost no stopping me.lol
Dec. 12th, 2007 10:30 am (UTC)
You know what they say about assuming? Well, with the club and the silk shirt...I'd got the roles reversed, right up until the very last line of part 1 (I'm trying not to spoil it for anyone else).

The first two parts were actually quite sad, with them searching for someone that was close, but not who they really wanted, always assuming that their true hearts desire wouldn't be interested. And that it was New Years Eve seemed to just make it more melancholy :(. So, I was so happy that it turned out okay, that they went for it and weren't planning on it being just that spur of the moment and then going back to their old relationship.

Dec. 12th, 2007 03:38 pm (UTC)
When I started writing, I knew it was Gibbs at first, but it wasn't until I was most of the way through the first part that I realized I could play it off and potentially have people confused until the boss line.

Yeah, I definitely want them to leave together. Why need a substitue when you can have the real deal.

In my mind (I almost wrote it) they argued over who's hotel room / place of residence to return to and get cleaned up and get to know each other a little better.
Dec. 12th, 2007 01:04 pm (UTC)
Awesome, hon. Very much so - and totally hot! ;)
Dec. 12th, 2007 03:38 pm (UTC)

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Dec. 12th, 2007 09:55 pm (UTC)
Definitely out of Gibbs' comfort zone, but he was out trying to find a replacement for Tony cause he didn't think he could have him... Where else to look for a Tony substitute but in a club. :-)

Yay for it being hot!!

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Dec. 12th, 2007 10:54 pm (UTC)
I was having a discussion somewhere else about Gibbs and Tony being on special at Wal-Mart... Alas... I don't think we can find them

*le sigh*
Dec. 22nd, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)
Oh my....*pours a glass of water over head*


Okay a little better..

Damn girl you can sure write one hot fic....


Mar. 8th, 2009 11:34 pm (UTC)
oerfkjc a;kn <---button mashingly good.
Loved the alternating points of view. And Tony stalking a silver haired substitute. just guh.
And it's just not Gibbs/DiNozzo without a headslap *g*
Nicely done!
Mar. 9th, 2009 12:33 am (UTC)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it and, yeah, they needed that headslap to get things settled.

Apr. 22nd, 2009 03:31 am (UTC)
Wow. ...Just wow. Gah. Brain died. Lab practical tomorrow. Bad life choices. At least I can die happy. Off for a cold shower now.
Apr. 23rd, 2009 01:42 am (UTC)

Glad you found this and enjoyed it!
Jan. 10th, 2010 05:48 pm (UTC)
I had read this one before but it's worth reading over. So hot, I love the way they found each other just before midnight. Brilliant!
Sep. 30th, 2010 12:46 am (UTC)
oh! *collapses*
Dec. 27th, 2011 06:00 pm (UTC)
Um. *fans self with hands* Wow.

Also, this: The hours crawled by like years, until, on the stroke of midnight, the crowd swelled around them. I have to ask: did you get that from The Highwayman? =)
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