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Fic: Fireworks (NCIS)

Title: Fireworks
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR21
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Warnings: SLASH; Sex; Rimming
Word Count: 300
Challenge: ncis_drabble; Challenge #90 - Fire

Crossposted: ncis_drabble; ncisfanfic; gibbsbasement; gibbs_dinozzo

Written For: My 26 Things meme... R - is for Rimming. Told you it would be R rated *wink* How do you feel about it? Do you find it easy to write? Give me your thoughts - all your dirtybadwrong thoughts. azraelz_angel

Summary: Tony shows Gibbs who's the master...

“Trust me Boss. You’ll love this. Been told I’m a master.”

Gibbs snorted as he bent his head to look back at Tony who was straddling his lower back as he worked his talented hands into tender muscles.

“You’ve given me a massage before DiNozzo. Nothing special about it.”

“But you distracted me from finishing the last time. Not going to stop me this time.”

As Tony finished talking, he shifted his position so his mouth started sliding down Gibbs’ back. Gibbs shivered slightly at the wet trail Tony’s tongue left in its wake.

“So what’s the grand finale?” Gibbs asked to distract himself from the feel of that tongue gliding across his ass.

“There’ll be fireworks. Trust me,” Tony said as he parted Gibbs’ ass and let his tongue slide into the crease.

Gibbs fisted his hands on the covers at the sensations he was feeling from Tony’s hands kneading his ass and the warm tongue working slowly over his hole. He found himself moving his hips against the mattress in an attempt to give friction to his suddenly hard cock.

“God,” slipped out of Gibbs’ mouth just as Tony plunged his agile tongue inside him.

Tony pulled back for just a moment with a low laugh. “Not God, Boss,” he said breathlessly before delving back in.

Soon Gibbs was on his knees and was bucking his hips back at Tony’s face and the tongue that was plunging into him with increasing speed. Gibbs gasped for breath when Tony wrapped a hand around his cock, brushing his fingers repeatedly over the tip. With the stimulation from the skilled hand and tongue working both ends, Gibbs lost his control and came with a shout before collapsing to the bed with Tony’s weight on top of him.

“Best damn massage ever.”

Response to Questions: Well... I guess I can write rimming. I'm not really big on it though for writing and/or reading unless it is done right and usually mixed in with other elements of a good story. Definitely isn't a kink I have myself... nope... not that I know of anyway...

Comments

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ferneberga
Jun. 13th, 2008 04:55 am (UTC)
Wow! That was good way to wake up particularly as I was falling asleep over the keyboard while working :-)
kaylashay
Jun. 13th, 2008 05:03 am (UTC)
Thanks... I'm kinda iffy on it because it's not something I'm completely comfortable writing, so glad someone liked it. :-)
ferneberga
Jun. 13th, 2008 06:38 am (UTC)
I think it's not so much the subject in itself that I enjoyed as the staging and the fact these two chaps are so hot is sufficient
tejas
Jun. 13th, 2008 05:55 am (UTC)
Ok, that worked. ;-)

While it's not a particular kink of mine, it's not a turn off, either.
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:35 am (UTC)
:-)

Thanks for the review on it!
laura_trekkie
Jun. 13th, 2008 08:33 am (UTC)
Heee, that was fun. It's good to know Tony can be the one in charge and Gibbs the one all desperate sometimes :).

Laura.
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
I think Tony can leave Gibbs desperate and at a loss for control... Of course, Gibbs getting that control back would be even hotter. ;-)


emony2
Jun. 13th, 2008 08:39 am (UTC)
Yup - it worked. ;)
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
Yay... :-)
justhuman
Jun. 13th, 2008 11:11 am (UTC)
Enjoyed the switch :-) Gibbs is such a force to be reckoned with that so very often it's Tony left speechless and out of control.
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:38 am (UTC)
Oh yeah... Tony can give as good as he gets... He's equal opportunity. :-)
avamclean
Jun. 13th, 2008 11:19 pm (UTC)
I'm not into rimming either, but wow... yeah, I think the only thought I can form right now is wow.
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:39 am (UTC)
:-)

I wrote it... didn't really think I could, but I did... darn NCIS has turned me into a slash and kink fiend... but I'm not going to complain cause I love the boys too much. :-)
gibozzo
Jun. 14th, 2008 11:05 am (UTC)
I'm not into rimming either.

But I love reading about Gibbs and DiNozzo doing it! ;)
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
Gibbs and DiNozzo can make so many things work... it's the chemistry between the two. :-)
ivyceltress
Jun. 14th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
Rimming is definitely one of mine and you hit the spot so to speak.
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:41 am (UTC)
Yay! :-)

I worried since I've never written it and rarely read it...
byrons_brain
Jun. 15th, 2008 11:51 am (UTC)
Wow, great story!
kaylashay
Jun. 16th, 2008 01:41 am (UTC)
Thanks!! :-)
nienna_surion18
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:26 pm (UTC)
This was good, I'd have rathered it the other way around just because I love when Gibbs is making Tony squirm but I really can't complain with this one. ^_^
azraelz_angel
Jul. 7th, 2008 03:38 pm (UTC)
WHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

R is definitely for Rimming! Yay. Holy hell that was hot. And fireworks, *snickers*.

If I think too hard on rimming it definitely squicks me out. Which is why I just write it, read it, and leave the thinky-thoughts behind!

Thanks for sharing :)
(Anonymous)
Jul. 15th, 2008 06:53 pm (UTC)
hii
Happy bithday :)
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