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Title: Five First Kisses and One Follow-Up
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR15
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Warnings: M/M Mentioned, nothing graphic
Genre: Slash
Pairings: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/Other(s) mentioned
Word Count: 6 x 100
Spoilers: Through 06x02 Agent Afloat
Challenge: ncis_drabble; Past Challenge #107 - Kiss

Crossposted: ncis_drabble; ncisfanfic; gibbs_dinozzo; gibbsbasement

Summary: Since the invention of the kiss there have been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left them all behind.

Shelly Hawthorne. She was in second grade while he was in first. She had arrived at the party with her parents only to be forgotten in the midst of drinks and business deals. She had somehow found the little hole he used to observe all his parents’ parties when his presence wasn’t demanded for showing off a new song or language. After awhile, she pointed at his mother who was in a corner with some business associate of his father’s and said, “Let’s do what their doing.” Afterwards, her parents dragged her from the house and he couldn’t sit comfortably.

Dennis Hawthorne. He was Shelly’s twin brother and a senior. Dennis was captain of the football team and was dating not one, but two of the cheerleaders. All the guys looked up to him and all the girls wanted him. It wasn’t until they were pressed against a row of lockers after the final game of the season in semi-darkness that he learned that not just the girls wanted Dennis. He couldn’t breath as a demanding male tongue pressed into his mouth. All he could do was buck against the thigh between his legs and embarrass himself a minute later.

Amanda Reed. Lieutenant Commander Hamilton Voss. She (or was that he?) was a killer. No matter which way he looked at it, the kiss made him sick. It wasn’t the gender that made him sick. It was the fact that she had killed Pacci, a man he had been friends and co-workers with for over two years and he didn’t know it. He let Kate’s teasing about tonguing a guy wash over him, but remembering her was making him sick. He managed to wait until Kate and McGee had left for the day before he went to the bathroom stall.

Jeanne Benoit. She was an assignment from the Director. In his mind he kept repeating that over and over as he befriended her in the hospital’s cafeteria. He talked her into a date that morning, but it wasn’t until their third date that he felt butterflies firing machine guns in his stomach as he pressed his lips to hers. A little voice that sounded suspiciously like Gibbs was telling him to think about what the hell he was doing. However, he ignored it just like he ignored the phantom twinges from repeated non-existent smacks to the back of his head.

Leroy Jethro Gibbs. He was his boss. He was Obi-Wan to his Luke, Ricky to his Lucy, Ennis to his Jack. He could only manage a lame joke as he looked at the blue tinged lips he had wanted to touch for years. "Don't make me kiss you, Boss." He pressed his own cold lips to Gibbs’ for the first time and tried to breathe life into his still form. As time slipped by, he wanted to order the older man to live just like he was ordered to do in that isolation room at Bethesda. Gibbs could not die.

The second ‘b’ really stood for bastard because it wasn’t until he was back from a four-month stint at sea that he had a chance to replace that first kiss. Their second happened in the basement with a bit of sawdust and bourbon for flavor. His mind flashed back to that long ago moment against a locker as a thigh pressed between his legs and he groaned. Their lips parted and Gibbs flashed a rare smile and some words, “Not bad for a first kiss, DiNozzo.” He smiled back and responded, “Not our first kiss Boss, but you’re getting better.”

Comments

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kelly_girl
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
Ha! Loved that last line. I think I liked the one about Shelly's brother the best.
kaylashay
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Dennis was my favorite too. Poor young Tony embarrassing himself...
ella_in_spades
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:53 am (UTC)
That last line was great.

♥ Ella
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
I loved it when I did it. I actually had something else there and it didn't read right so I got that instead.
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kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
:-)

Gibbs needs some competition once in awhile. :-)
trixxanna
Nov. 2nd, 2008 06:36 am (UTC)
Nice work, and this visual butterflies firing machine guns made me snort hot tea as I fell into giggles.

Perfect DiNozzo line there at the close.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:35 am (UTC)
At first he just had butterflies in his stomach and then I was like... DiNozzo's don't do ordinary butterflies, so they started firing machine guns. :-)

Couldn't resist that line.
trixxanna
Nov. 3rd, 2008 02:25 am (UTC)
and then I was like... DiNozzo's don't do ordinary butterflies, so they started firing machine guns

And this wins for best random ass idea of the week of November 2-8, 2008.
*hands you Caff-Pow* :D
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 02:37 am (UTC)
:-)

And yay for Caf!Pow!
loopy2
Nov. 2nd, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
Brillaint.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Thanks!
xanthe
Nov. 2nd, 2008 08:50 am (UTC)
Fabulous! I liked all the kisses but the banter at the end of the *second* Gibbs kiss was my favourite *ggg*.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:38 am (UTC)
I have a *thing* for Gibbs/Tony banter. They banter so well.

And I really do love that icon. They are so similar in so many ways. :-)
xanthe
Nov. 3rd, 2008 08:37 am (UTC)
Thanks re the icon *beams*. I got a friend to make it for me and we had such fun with it.

I wish we saw more Gibbs/Tony banter on the show. Sigh.
ferneberga
Nov. 2nd, 2008 11:40 am (UTC)
Cute! And coincide with the rest the last line was brill and so DiNozzo :-)
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:39 am (UTC)
:-)

DiNozzo was doing a cheer that he had one up on Gibbs.
adnamamai
Nov. 2nd, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
Love it!
Last line is the best!
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:39 am (UTC)
It seems that the last line is the winning line of the fic.

:-)
ursula4x
Nov. 2nd, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
Pure essense of Tony!
Love the way everything flowed, revealing different aspects of our boy.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
Re: Pure essense of Tony!
:-)

I love getting inside Tony's head.
adafrog
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
Lovely.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
Thanks!
hawk_soaring
Nov. 2nd, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
Ah, wonderful fic!! Loved Tony's remark to Gibbs at the end as well as the glimpse into Tony's experimentation growing up.
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
I'm so glad I changed that last line now. Originally it was something else and it just didn't work. I had to change that last paragraph a bit for the 100 to work out to have that line.

You know Tony had to experiment. I see him as the kind of guy who would try anything at least once to see if he likes it.
psyko_kittie
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
Awesome last line. Great job. :D
kaylashay
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
*pets the last line*

:-)

Thanks!
justhuman
Nov. 3rd, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
Nice closer - ties up the story well :-)
kaylashay
Nov. 4th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm so glad I changed it from what I originally had there now. I don't even remember what it was now... :-)
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kaylashay
Nov. 4th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
I *heart* me some Tony.

:-)
avamclean
Nov. 3rd, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
*bounces* You posted! And it was made of win!

I'm still partial to the Dennis Hawthorne one but the last line was so very Tony. *applauds*
kaylashay
Nov. 4th, 2008 05:27 am (UTC)
I think Tony needs to meet Dennis Hawthorne again pre-NCIS (maybe Philly or Baltimore) and turn the tables on him. :-)
jagfanlj
Nov. 7th, 2008 07:20 am (UTC)
And the winner of the Last Line Lollapolooza championship isssss...
KAYLA SHAY for her shameless shenanigans.
*holds up engraved leaded crystal sun catcher*
On behalf of all the Gibbs-DiNozzo banter lovers, please accept this award for Best Punch Line, EVV-VAHR. Honestly, that line belongs right up there with Bacall's crack to Bogart, "It's even better when you help."

~_~_~_~_~

All kidding aside,
My favorite tale is the Amanda Reed kiss. I had never thought of it from that angle. I'd love to see you take the idea further and develop it into a full-blown story.
(Anonymous)
Jan. 10th, 2009 09:36 am (UTC)
Your stories
Do you ever feel that maybe you are demoralizing and sabotarging the characters of Gibbs and DiNozzo and how humiliated and embarraced Mark Harmon and Michael Weatherly might feel if they read your stories? You have such a talent for words, but you waste it on such utter porno drivel. I'm broadminded and I've read a few worse stories than yours which were far too over the top. If you are such a fan, why do you treat them with such disrespect? Why not write an episode of ncis they can be proud of, you have the talent.
not_hathor
Apr. 25th, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
Been lurking and reading your NCIS fic for quite a while.... love it....

This line made me melt....

Leroy Jethro Gibbs. He was his boss. He was Obi-Wan to his Luke, Ricky to his Lucy, Ennis to his Jack.

Thank you.....

Mary
kaylashay
Apr. 25th, 2009 07:46 pm (UTC)
Thanks for dropping the review!

And glad you enjoyed that line!

:-)
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