Then, a few pages later, I found a rewrite that was a great improvement. And it ditched the self-insert.
Now, here's what I want to know... I'm willing to type up what was written and actually let people in my journal see it. Even if I hide under a desk when I do it.
What I want to know is...
ETA: Highland should be Highlander
What do you want to see?
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