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Fic: The Line (NCIS)

Title: The Line
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Genre: Slash (Implied, Nothing Described); Angst
Spoilers: Episode Tag to 07x16 Mother's Day
Word Count: 200
Written For: ncis_drabble Special Challenge #001 - Pairings

Crossposted: ncisfanfic; ncis_fic; gibbs_dinozzo; ncis_drabble; ncis_slash

Summary: Certain lines should never be crossed.
Tony threw the pillow across the room in an attempt to get the perfume scent still lingering in the air away from his sensitive nose. It didn't work.

"Did you know she finished off the last of my beer? And I could have sworn there was more pizza in the fridge."

Gibbs just grunted and that fueled Tony's anger.

"I get that you used her to cry foul on you with a confession from Shannon's mom. But- You're playing with fire Boss and I don't want to get burned."

"What're you saying, Tony?" and Gibbs voice had a tinge of insecurity that Tony never recalled hearing before.

"I'm saying that I know you have baggage. Hell, I let my baggage walk out of that hotel with a chunk of my own money. But there's a line and…" Tony trailed off, unsure of how to finish.

"You think I crossed the line? Who says you get to draw the line, DiNozzo?"

Gibbs' voice was raising and Tony knew it wasn't going to end well.

"I say I get to, Jethro. And I think you crossed it."

Tony stood up and looked longingly around the place he called home. Then he left.


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Mar. 3rd, 2010 04:56 am (UTC)
Oh, man. *frets*


God, I was hoping that someone would write something about Tony calling Gibbs out. Thank you so much.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:03 am (UTC)
Yeah... I don't think I've ever had Tony walk out and not eventually put them back together.... *frets with you*

And I was working on a spanky fic for Xanthe too... :(

My muse isn't happy.
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Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:00 am (UTC)

::huggles the boys::

Gibbs does seem to need a size 13 to the ass, eh?
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:02 am (UTC)
He needs something... repeated self head slaps??

Grrr.... the episode irritated me and my muse. How am I supposed to go back to my spanky fic for Xanthe now.... *pouts*
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)

I have to say that I actually liked the episode up until the end. And I still do like it overall...except the end.

I haven't really wanted to talk about where I think this is all going because it irritates me and makes me nervous.

I want them to fix this so bad, but I don't know how that's going to be possible.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:10 am (UTC)
I miss the days of dead petty officers... :(

There was actually quite a few parts I liked within the episode, but overall, it let me down and overshadowed the parts I did like I think. :(
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Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:10 am (UTC)
o_0 Gibbs better fix this mess or I will not be responsible for my actions.

Great tag! Thanks for sharing.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:16 am (UTC)
It's sad that my muse doesn't want to fix this particular story line. :(

*hugs Tony*
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Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:33 am (UTC)
I loved the tag.... Are you going to continue it?
Mar. 3rd, 2010 05:56 am (UTC)
I think I love this.

There are times, no matter how much I love Gibbs/Tony, that I want Tony to walk away.

This was awesomeness.

Thanks for sharing.

Tabee :)

Mar. 3rd, 2010 06:16 am (UTC)
Truth is, I really don't understand these episodes that
much lately. For example, why was tonight the first we
hear of Gibbs' mother-in-law? Could we bring back Tony's
father? Good coupling? Yes? No? God, I hate loose ends.
And Kate? What happened to Kate? And Sunshine? Is he
back from New York yet?
My pills kick in soon. Nightey night. Sarah
Mar. 3rd, 2010 06:36 am (UTC)
Yes! Tony so needs to call him out. Fortunately I think they will get to this point at some point in time but they'll probably find a way to muck it up by sticking Ziva in there too. You have done it the right way.

But Gibbs is going to mend his ways isn't he? *whimpers*
Mar. 3rd, 2010 07:06 am (UTC)
This! This was what I was waiting for at the end of the episode. Or something along the lines of, 'I know you're stringing her along to try and figure out her angle, but did you have to let her drink my beer?' *kicks NCIS writers* Get on that, jerks! Quit hinting at Tiva and Gibbs/Bitch Queen Lawyer
Mar. 3rd, 2010 09:41 am (UTC)
Somehow I don't want it to be fixed... I don't want a happy end.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 11:59 am (UTC)
Ouch - but perfect.

You said you were waiting for Tony to leave, Gibbs? Well, congratulations.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 03:01 pm (UTC)
EEP! Gibbs better go after him! There better be hawt kissing! Or spanking! Hey, Tony could spank Gibbs?! I'm easy...*g*

Seriously - this was really sad. I do understand where Tony is coming from though. I thought Gibbs was playing a dangerous game in that ep, knowing he knows about Skanky Woman's involvement with Bell. It's a good thing YOUR Gibbs has Tony to look out for him at least!

Mar. 3rd, 2010 06:50 pm (UTC)
oh EXCELLENT. Gibbs needs to be called out for what he did.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 07:32 pm (UTC)
Oh, ow.
Mar. 3rd, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
NO! You can't leave it like this, not with Tony not thinking he's wanted in his own home, second B or what! Gibbs must fix this.
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