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Fic: Five More Shades of Red (NCIS)

Title: Five More Shades of Red
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Challenge: ncis_drabble; Challenge #78 - Red
Word Count: 5 x 100

Spoilers: 05x07 Requiem

Crossposted: ncis_drabble; ncisfanfic; ncis_haven

Summary: The color of red contained a mixture of happiness, pain and anger throughout Gibbs' life.

Red. The day I saw the sunlight shining through her hair, I fell in love. In my heart, I knew that she was the one and that no one else would do. We started a life together and along came our pride and joy, our Kelly. Her hair wasn’t the red of her mother’s, but it shone just the same. In the days before I left for Kuwait, we spent time at the beach. The memory of the setting sun shining down on both my girls was engraved forever in my heart. It carried me through the battles I fought.

Red. When I opened my eyes, I could see flashes of red. The sounds cascading around my head made me want to rip my ears from my head to get away from them. I could feel hands fighting against my movements, holding me down, telling me to lay still. Pain coursed through my body. Voices above me mentioned explosions and death of my fellow marines, that I was lucky. I opened my mouth to argue, but nothing came out. I closed my eyes against the red and tried to picture Shannon and Kelly until I fell into a fitful sleep.

Red. They were dead. I wasn’t there to protect them, keep them safe. Nothing I did would bring them back to me. But I had to do something. I had to kill the bastard that took them away, that ripped them from my life without a chance to say goodbye, without a chance to go with them. I tracked him for days through Mexico. Watched the places he went, saw the whores he fucked, waited for the right moment to take him out the way he did Shannon and Kelly. As I pulled the trigger, red was all I saw.

Red. Seeing the blood at the corner of his mouth both angered and scared me. It angered me because the reason behind it was pointless, just part of a sick woman’s attempt at seeking justice for a perceived wrong. It scared me because there was nothing I could do. There was no way to protect him. I couldn’t hunt it down if the younger man died. The only thing I could do was order him to live. Two weeks later, as I looked at Kate’s blood on his face, I wondered briefly if he would have been better off dying.

Red. I remembered the car, I remembered the water, Maddie’s limp body in the passenger seat, Tony’s face in front of the windshield. Then it went blank. I was in a void. Then I found myself standing somewhere and I opened my eyes. I could see flashes of red at first. And then I saw them. Shannon and Kelly were in front of me once more. I wanted nothing more than to go to them, hold them in my arms and never let go. Something pulled me away. I was left with nothing but the memory of their shining hair.

PS: Do you want your very own NCIS fic written by yours truly? If you do, go check out what I have to offer and then go bid on me at Sweet Charity.


( 15 Campfires — Leave a Comment )
Mar. 22nd, 2008 06:20 am (UTC)
*blinks* Wow...that was just wow. I'm not sure what else to say. This was powerful and beautiful and heart wrenching. Wow.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 06:28 am (UTC)
*huggles the Ava review love*


I was going for 'tear at your heart' with this. It's been bouncing around in my head for days demanding to be written.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 06:23 am (UTC)
tried to click on the links to bid but it didnt take me anywhere. links don't work. loved the story.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
Huh... They're working for me...


and to see what I have to offer: http://kaylashay81.livejournal.com/63841.html

Or go straight to http://www.sweet-charity.net, I'm listed as KaylaShay there.

Glad you liked this one! It's been bouncing around in my head since I wrote Tony's shades of red.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 07:05 am (UTC)
To reiterate my earlier commments...

Wow... what pegged your angst button?

VERY powerful imagery. Extremely.
Mar. 25th, 2008 05:07 am (UTC)
Re: To reiterate my earlier commments...
If you want to see my angst button in action, check out the Abby one I just posted.... I think it's the angstiest of all three of them.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
Beautiful, just beautiful.


Edited at 2008-03-22 03:24 pm (UTC)
Mar. 25th, 2008 05:06 am (UTC)
Yay... glad you liked it. It looks like I'll have a little color series going. I just did Abby's red one so I've got 3 red themed ones and then I'll start on blues for the next challenge.
Mar. 22nd, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
These killed meh ded
Mar. 25th, 2008 05:05 am (UTC)
*sends hot male of your choice to perform mouth-to-mouth*

Mar. 25th, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
omg, there's no way I could choose!
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Mar. 25th, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
I really laid on the angst in the Abby piece I just posted.... angst central.
Mar. 23rd, 2008 08:49 am (UTC)
Really lovely story-well written.:)
Mar. 25th, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Apr. 3rd, 2008 02:40 pm (UTC)
This was beautiful, I loved it:D
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