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Title: Five First Kisses and One Follow-Up
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR15
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Warnings: M/M Mentioned, nothing graphic
Genre: Slash
Pairings: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/Other(s) mentioned
Word Count: 6 x 100
Spoilers: Through 06x02 Agent Afloat
Challenge: ncis_drabble; Past Challenge #107 - Kiss

Crossposted: ncis_drabble; ncisfanfic; gibbs_dinozzo; gibbsbasement

Summary: Since the invention of the kiss there have been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left them all behind.

Shelly Hawthorne. She was in second grade while he was in first. She had arrived at the party with her parents only to be forgotten in the midst of drinks and business deals. She had somehow found the little hole he used to observe all his parents’ parties when his presence wasn’t demanded for showing off a new song or language. After awhile, she pointed at his mother who was in a corner with some business associate of his father’s and said, “Let’s do what their doing.” Afterwards, her parents dragged her from the house and he couldn’t sit comfortably.

Dennis Hawthorne. He was Shelly’s twin brother and a senior. Dennis was captain of the football team and was dating not one, but two of the cheerleaders. All the guys looked up to him and all the girls wanted him. It wasn’t until they were pressed against a row of lockers after the final game of the season in semi-darkness that he learned that not just the girls wanted Dennis. He couldn’t breath as a demanding male tongue pressed into his mouth. All he could do was buck against the thigh between his legs and embarrass himself a minute later.

Amanda Reed. Lieutenant Commander Hamilton Voss. She (or was that he?) was a killer. No matter which way he looked at it, the kiss made him sick. It wasn’t the gender that made him sick. It was the fact that she had killed Pacci, a man he had been friends and co-workers with for over two years and he didn’t know it. He let Kate’s teasing about tonguing a guy wash over him, but remembering her was making him sick. He managed to wait until Kate and McGee had left for the day before he went to the bathroom stall.

Jeanne Benoit. She was an assignment from the Director. In his mind he kept repeating that over and over as he befriended her in the hospital’s cafeteria. He talked her into a date that morning, but it wasn’t until their third date that he felt butterflies firing machine guns in his stomach as he pressed his lips to hers. A little voice that sounded suspiciously like Gibbs was telling him to think about what the hell he was doing. However, he ignored it just like he ignored the phantom twinges from repeated non-existent smacks to the back of his head.

Leroy Jethro Gibbs. He was his boss. He was Obi-Wan to his Luke, Ricky to his Lucy, Ennis to his Jack. He could only manage a lame joke as he looked at the blue tinged lips he had wanted to touch for years. "Don't make me kiss you, Boss." He pressed his own cold lips to Gibbs’ for the first time and tried to breathe life into his still form. As time slipped by, he wanted to order the older man to live just like he was ordered to do in that isolation room at Bethesda. Gibbs could not die.

The second ‘b’ really stood for bastard because it wasn’t until he was back from a four-month stint at sea that he had a chance to replace that first kiss. Their second happened in the basement with a bit of sawdust and bourbon for flavor. His mind flashed back to that long ago moment against a locker as a thigh pressed between his legs and he groaned. Their lips parted and Gibbs flashed a rare smile and some words, “Not bad for a first kiss, DiNozzo.” He smiled back and responded, “Not our first kiss Boss, but you’re getting better.”


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Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
Ha! Loved that last line. I think I liked the one about Shelly's brother the best.
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Dennis was my favorite too. Poor young Tony embarrassing himself...
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:53 am (UTC)
That last line was great.

♥ Ella
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
I loved it when I did it. I actually had something else there and it didn't read right so I got that instead.
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Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)

Gibbs needs some competition once in awhile. :-)
Nov. 2nd, 2008 06:36 am (UTC)
Nice work, and this visual butterflies firing machine guns made me snort hot tea as I fell into giggles.

Perfect DiNozzo line there at the close.
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:35 am (UTC)
At first he just had butterflies in his stomach and then I was like... DiNozzo's don't do ordinary butterflies, so they started firing machine guns. :-)

Couldn't resist that line.
(no subject) - trixxanna - Nov. 3rd, 2008 02:25 am (UTC) - Expand
(no subject) - kaylashay - Nov. 3rd, 2008 02:37 am (UTC) - Expand
Nov. 2nd, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Nov. 2nd, 2008 08:50 am (UTC)
Fabulous! I liked all the kisses but the banter at the end of the *second* Gibbs kiss was my favourite *ggg*.
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:38 am (UTC)
I have a *thing* for Gibbs/Tony banter. They banter so well.

And I really do love that icon. They are so similar in so many ways. :-)
(no subject) - xanthe - Nov. 3rd, 2008 08:37 am (UTC) - Expand
Nov. 2nd, 2008 11:40 am (UTC)
Cute! And coincide with the rest the last line was brill and so DiNozzo :-)
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:39 am (UTC)

DiNozzo was doing a cheer that he had one up on Gibbs.
Nov. 2nd, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
Love it!
Last line is the best!
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:39 am (UTC)
It seems that the last line is the winning line of the fic.

Nov. 2nd, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
Pure essense of Tony!
Love the way everything flowed, revealing different aspects of our boy.
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
Re: Pure essense of Tony!

I love getting inside Tony's head.
Nov. 2nd, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
Nov. 2nd, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
Ah, wonderful fic!! Loved Tony's remark to Gibbs at the end as well as the glimpse into Tony's experimentation growing up.
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
I'm so glad I changed that last line now. Originally it was something else and it just didn't work. I had to change that last paragraph a bit for the 100 to work out to have that line.

You know Tony had to experiment. I see him as the kind of guy who would try anything at least once to see if he likes it.
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
Awesome last line. Great job. :D
Nov. 3rd, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
*pets the last line*


Nov. 3rd, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
Nice closer - ties up the story well :-)
Nov. 4th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm so glad I changed it from what I originally had there now. I don't even remember what it was now... :-)
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Nov. 4th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
I *heart* me some Tony.

Nov. 3rd, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
*bounces* You posted! And it was made of win!

I'm still partial to the Dennis Hawthorne one but the last line was so very Tony. *applauds*
Nov. 4th, 2008 05:27 am (UTC)
I think Tony needs to meet Dennis Hawthorne again pre-NCIS (maybe Philly or Baltimore) and turn the tables on him. :-)
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